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Post by Kaitam (66) on Jan 13, 2006 14:03:53 GMT -5
Meanwhile, on the other side of the galaxy, an aprentice jedi and his master were training in the desert lands of alkatuna. Suddenly the master jedi fell to his knees. "Master jokarie what is wrong?" said the aprentice jedi Kaitam. "I can feel something, can't you, something's wrong, I dont know what it is but its coming here." replied Jokarie. "For us! We have to leave now!!". "But master how? We have no ship to leave in and if we send for one, from the other jedi, it will take hours to arrive". Jokarie looked around for an escape route, but nothing, and the disturbence was getting ever closer. "We will have to stand and fight, as there is no where to run to." said Jokarie looking worried, he knew that if they did fight, there was a chance he would lose his aprentice and could not ever face the other jedi in the same confedent way again. The disturbence was close by now. "Master!" shouted Kaitam "Look!". A cloud of dust apeared, it was getting closer and it seemed there was someone in it, riding a sandspeeder and he didn't look friendly.
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Post by Norph on Jan 13, 2006 14:25:01 GMT -5
OOC: Two great posts guys...but, the Creatures can't be defeated with a lightsaber...but still a great post, Anka, sorry about that, you can rewrite it if you like. Or just reply to my post
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Post by Kaitam (66) on Jan 13, 2006 14:26:35 GMT -5
thanks lo'an
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Post by Kaitam (66) on Jan 13, 2006 15:18:06 GMT -5
Erm I asked loan if I can use the soa base he said I must use a flashback of my escape cos its been destroyed so here is what i'm doing.
back to the story
The cloud of dust was getting very close now. The two jedis sprung into action charging towards the speeder lightsabers gleeming. The speeder suddenly stops and launches out the driver at the jedis, the driver produses a red lightsaber and attacks them. "It's a Sith" said Kaitam shocked. "what... were you doing... at the... soa base" said the sith in a rusty voice, in between attacks. "How did you know I was there" repied Jokarie sharply. "I was sent by the master, the one you tried to kill" said the sith using force push to knock away kaitam. The sith jumped back in the sandspeeder and drove off. "Master?... you went to the soa base without the jedi council's permission" snapped kaitam "Erm... yes" sighed Jokarie "I had to... I was over there to find out what happened to Hannike, the one who mysteriosly dissapeared, well it seems he was turned into one off them creatures that have attacked many jedi recently, but i was spotted by this 'master' guy so i attacked him, I thought he was dead but it seems otherwise... I also set off the destruction of the base, its wasn't the creatures." "but that means..." "I am the one who killed hundereds of inocent people... now you know this" Jokarie paused. Kaitam noticed a tear in Jokarie's eye. "I will have too kill you".
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Post by Norph on Jan 13, 2006 18:59:51 GMT -5
Thats a cool post, but could you tone it down a bit? Your character destroying the base etc, you don't have to change it, just remember for future posts. Thanks
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Post by Kaitam (66) on Jan 14, 2006 10:43:11 GMT -5
erm i noticed that anka sent a patrol into the destert too look for corpses in the RP can i use this info in my next post?
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Post by ankaleeda on Jan 14, 2006 12:04:37 GMT -5
Sorry you cant if you have read my post the patrols found one body and the other came into our base. Also Great posts guys! ok. I will carry on with a ship heading for a planet. And Lo'an what are you on about when you say i thought you all were dead i wrote a huge post about that.Also you can talk to me normally because i speak Twi'lek.
"Well.."Began Anka "We had just finished the...." Then the power went down. "We are locked out of the controls and are heading for that Planet!" The planet loomed before them"Watch where you are waving that thing." Shouted Anka. As lo'an started up a laser scapel. "Hows that?" Said Lo'an standing up. Anka checked the screen "Still nothing." "*********" Sweared Lo'an kicking the console. The machine whirred into life. "YES!" shouted Lo'an. "Dont celabrate yet we have 1 minute till we hit the atmosphere by then it will be to late, how long till the controls come online?" "About 1 minute" Replied Lo'an. "30 seconds" "Cmon.." "20 seaconds" "CMON" "10 seaconds" "Almost there.." "Yes its online!" said Lo'an just as the ship hit the atmosphere.
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Post by Kaitam (66) on Jan 14, 2006 12:26:20 GMT -5
ok i'll think of something else
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Post by Kaitam (66) on Jan 14, 2006 12:55:54 GMT -5
I've had to change my origianal idea but that dosen't matter I think this should be just as good lol,
Jokarie grabbed his lightsaber and slashed at Kaitam's head, he ducked and drew his lightsaber swiping at Jokarie's legs. Jokarie jumped over Kaitam and used force push on him, sending Kaitam flying, Kiatam's lightsaber rolled under Jokarie's foot where it was crushed. "Game's over, time to die." Smirked Jokarie, his foot on Kaitam's chest, his lightsaber held high ready for the killer blow. Kaitam grabbed Jokarie's leg and threw him off, both quickly stood up. "There's nowhere to run, nowhere to hide and you have no weapon to defend yourself with" Laughed Jokarie. "Give up you have no chance!". Jokarie threw his lightsaber at Kaitam but a purple laser deflected it a couple of inches from Kaitam's chest. A jedi hunter hovered above them. "Do'h I missed him, I'll take out the one who protected him then." He said fireing another purple laser this time at Jokarie. The jedi master fell down dead. "Now for the defenceless one" Smiled the jedi hunter pointing his gun to Kaitam's head. He fired but kaitam jumped out the way, the laser hit his left arm instead. Kaitam landed next to Jokarie's lightsaber, which he trew at the hunter, beheading him. the headless body fell to the ground in a heap. Kaitam went to it and picked up the lightsaber putting it on to his belt. He was safe for now.
If you want me to change it just say, i did tone it down a bit already, but it still may be a bit... over the top lol.
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Post by Norph on Jan 15, 2006 7:53:43 GMT -5
That post is OK, but you are at the SOA base? People don't know about the place, so all these people turning up should be happining, also, I'm going to delete the last post Anka, and also, can you not use my character as much, because you're making him look like an over excited 5 year old when hes a calm Jedi Master.
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Lo'an sat, unmoved as the ship went crashing down towards the surface of the Planet, it was a beautiful place, with lush green grass and water covering the whole planet, they were heading for what looked like a giant Base of some sort, noticing a docking bay, Lo'an quickly flew into it and landed smoothly, he rose from his seat and lifted his hood over his head and moved out the ship
"No fighting is allowed, if you are caught fighting or anyother sort of crime, you will be put in the holding cells intill you go into Trial, if you fail the Trial you will be banned from the planet, or even killed...Welcome...to Man'aan"
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Post by kacitoaranir on Jan 15, 2006 8:01:07 GMT -5
OCC: I cant find my last post. Did u delete it
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Post by ankaleeda on Jan 15, 2006 9:53:19 GMT -5
You see thats the difficult bit i was trying to write it so you would be a jedi master but still keep your cool anyway anybody would panic if they were going to crash into a planet.
Anka waited patiently untill he got bored and went out to stretch his legs. Lo'an had gone on a recon mission. As he went to the door he glanced out and saw some guards at the ships door. By there reptilion faces he guessed they were on Ma'aan. Anka wondered why they hadent searched the ship but he diddnt have time to ponder on it now. He searched the cargo hold and found a thermal Detonator. He went to the front of the ship and with his lightsabre cut a hole in the window. Putting some credits in the secret compatment for Lo'an to pay for the damage if he should return. He chucked the detonator into the undergrowth. The detonator exploded and set fire to a large tree. The guards ran to the scene and Anka slipped out of the ship and into the base. He walked for about two hours before he gave up. There he was probably the most wanted man in the galaxy for crimes against the force hunted by jedi and bounty Hunters stuck in the middle of a base with no Jedi to help him this time.
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Post by Norph on Jan 15, 2006 11:45:49 GMT -5
OOC: The ship isn't in a Jungle, its in a base sort of thing, search Man'aan in google and look it up
And a lot of posts have been deleated so its possible yours did, if it is possible, you could do it again, or just carry on from the post
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After scounting around the base, the place was civilised and peaceful, they could rest here, get supplies without any problems, Lo'an heard an explosion and ran back to the ship, Guards were running around the hanger
"Aww...What?" He watched Anka running away into the Base
"What was the point" Lo'an muttered in his own language...
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Post by Kaitam (66) on Jan 15, 2006 12:52:35 GMT -5
During which time back on alkatuna, Kaitam decided to get to a place of help, the one problem was the only thing he could see was destert land, no cities or medi-points. He decided to wait untill night, then follow the brightest star he could see, that way he'd at least have a sence of direction, the feeling in his arm was coming back unfortunatly it was pain, that was all he needed. Night came, after what seemed like a lifetime of pain, the agony was unbearable and was worsening quickly, Kaitam saw what he needed, a big bright star, and followed it, untill he fell to is knees in agony. He needed to keep moving or he would surely die here. Everything went pitch black, Kaitam has passed out.
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Post by Darth Loginix on Jan 15, 2006 21:27:16 GMT -5
ooc: hope you don't mind my sudden introduction, but... ic:
"Why the hell not?" Logan asked the low ranked Sith "Sir, there were two of them, both trained Jedi, I had no way of--" the boy began, but was cut off. "You didn't even get the information?! Not a single word?!?" "No sir, I--"
Logan turned and spat at the ground. This was why, time and time again, the Sith had fallen. "If I have to do it myself, so help me, when I come back..."
The boy got the point and ran like anything. Logan walked through their base on Alkatuna to the hangar. He was shocked. The boy had been unable to get a single word out of a lowly Jedi before he ran with his tail between his legs. Imbeciles. All of them.
Logan hopped into a small starfighter, and took off, scouring the dessert floor as the day grew dark.
Finally, after an hour or two of searching, Logan's eyes picked out a figure who was slumped lazily on the ground. A Jedi.
"Now we're getting somewhere," Logan muttered, as he approached the fallen figure of Kaitam.
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